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After showing my teacher both the development of my work and the final pieces, he gave me some criticism to potentially help me improve. He said that the title of the magazine that I had chosen was boring and uninventive and that I might as well have called it 'magazine for sixth formers' as it was too self-explanatory and needed more imagination put into it. I took this into consideration  and came up with a number of new ideas. The title I decided to keep for my magazine was forti-6. This is an abbreviation for Fortismere Sixth Form and has an edgy and original feel to it. I am pleased with this title because in my own opinion it is much better than my previous title and shows more character and imagination in my work.